He smiled Β at me quietly,

reading my entire secret under my eyes.

I thought,

That the view of the sunset will draw us together “Image


24 thoughts on “THE STORY

  1. This poem really reveals your talent. You paint a detailed picture and describe so much, make me understand and feel so much, with just twentyfour words (yes I counted).
    Saying something without saying it, letting the reader fill in the blanks himself, that’s just fantastic and again, tremendously talented.
    Btw, that is the way commercials work, the most successful commercial that sell the most is the ones that makes the consumer fill in the gaps and participate in the commercial – and yeah… you really sold this to me. I like it. πŸ™‚

  2. Yes. I love the poem. Sounds like my old style of blogging that I still do sometimes. It being old isn’t a bad thing, I LOVE writing like this. It’s the only type of poetry I can stand. Keeeeeep writing like this πŸ˜€

  3. Love your poem and painting.

    Thank you for visiting my blog today. I appreciate the time you took to stop by. May your day be filled with joy and peace.

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